Sunday 5 February 2012

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY



Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday where you are treated to six sentences from uber-talented writers to whet your appetite.


This week's six are from ALWAYS HOPE.   In this scene... Ash has landed in Mobile Alabama and has an unexpected chauffeur waiting for him...


“I’m Ashdon Watts—someone’s waiting for me?”
“I am.”
Ash turned on his heel at the rich, deep voice behind him and found himself looking into the piercing blue eyes of… well… an honest to God cowboy. The Marlboro Man, skittered across the surface of his tired brain, as did the vague awareness he was staring, slack-jawed at the handsome, rugged man in front of him. Ash’s gaze couldn’t help but wander over the clean swell of the man’s biceps where his arms were crossed over his chest, or the bunch of muscular thighs beneath the soft denim of his jeans. The man lifted a work-roughened hand and removed his hat and Ash hoped the involuntary gasp came from the woman at the desk and not from him when a curtain of sweat-dampened, chestnut hair tumbled onto broad shoulders.


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8 comments:

  1. What a brilliant idea, six sentence Sunday.

    Great little story, too!

    x

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  2. Wow! Super sexy six! Loved it!!

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  3. You're such a tease..LOL
    Great idea though, smart.

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  4. Love the descriptive sentences. I'm all about descriptions. Nice!

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  5. beautifully descriptive as always!

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  6. Oh Ash, you lucky man! Sounds like a delicious story. :)

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  7. Great description, l can feel the tension in there!

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