Friday, 16 December 2011

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY

Hello my pretties and welcome to Flash Fiction Friday where you will find one hundred words per week based upon a picture chosen at random by either myself or my other cohorts in this marvellous adventure.  Make sure you follow the links both within the one hundred words and at the bottom of this post to see what delights await you.




I feel his eyes on me, their weight on my skin a caress, but he doesn't approach. He never approaches me.  Why don't you approach him? I hear you ask.  Have you seen you?  As if he'd turn you down.  I get that a lot from people who, just because you're easy on the eye, you can get whoever you want—I wish.  It doesn't work that way. 
I try to attract his attention, jutting out my hips and running a hand down my chest, waiting, hoping… but he simply slips away into the shadows and I’m left alone… again.

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16 comments:

  1. well, that boy needs to do more to entice his friend.. And the friend needs some self assurance to make the first step..maybe?
    Great post!

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  2. Oh man! I would so stomp down the hall and make the man notice me! Great FFF!

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  3. Great FFF. The tension, the wanting, the fear of rejection. It's all there. Well done

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  4. I don't know bout you, but I'd do him in a heartbeat. Dude doesn't know what he's missing. Great post, Lisa

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  5. Always wanting. This was beautifully worded, and almost poetic. Loved it!

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  6. Oh wonderful insight into these two characters! Great story telling!

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  7. Argh, so lovely but painful. He needs to make the first move.

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  8. Yep, I know just how he feels - to be so damn hot it intimidates people. Nicely done Ms. Lisa, touching and sweet - I liked it.

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  9. Follow him! Be bold, ask for what you want...Great post!

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  10. Awesome story. I see a plot bunny!

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  11. Wow, so beautiful people have self esteem issues too? Interest take on it. :)

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  12. Nice. Maybe the other guy is too pretty himself and doesn't see the beauty inside him because he never gives them a chance. :)

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  13. Please go after him...I understand you are scared but just maybe...the most important things deserve a few risks! :D Excellent!

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  14. great post Lisa! You could feel the tension and longing

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