Sunday 18 September 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY!





Welcome to this week's six.

Contintental Divide is the current WIP of the collaboration of Laura Harner and myself.  Let me set the scene...

In their attempt to go undercover at the UN, Jamie, Earl of Fordham, has to engineer a public falling out with his family.  Knowing how his mother hates his face in the papers, Jamie and Remy attend a local gay club and put on a show for the papparazzi.  But their desire for each other is ignited by their situation and before Jamie knows what's happening, the show they're putting on is all too real.  Unfortunately...back in their suite, the outcome is not the one Jamie was expecting...





Opening his eyes as Remy’s weight left him, he smiled and stretched languidly while Remy cleaned himself up with a T-shirt that had been discarded earlier before they’d left. Then the butterflies started to tremble in his stomach when he realized that Remy was buttoning his shirt with hasty fingers. He watched, in stunned disbelief as Remy tucked himself back into his jeans and zipped them up. “Remy?” Jamie flinched at the coldness of Remy’s gaze as he lifted his arm and casually checked the watch on his wrist. His words echoed in Jamie’s ears long after the door of the suite had slammed behind him.
“I hope you enjoyed the show, but if you’ll excuse me, I’m off the clock, boss.” 


I, like Remy, hope you enjoyed it.  Don't forget to do the clicky clicky and check out the miriad of uber-talented writer's who have their sixes waiting to delight you over at Six Sentence Sunday and I shall see you next week....until then....

10 comments:

  1. Wow, pretty good! Well-descriptive.

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  2. Ouch! Poor Remy? I was kinda feeling poor Jamie! Great emotional Six!

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  3. I agree with Kallypso Masters. Poor remy indeed.
    The slamming of the door made it all to real. Excellent six Lisa!

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  4. Oh, that wasn't nice at all. Poor Jamie.

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  5. Loved it Lisa. You go a long way to proving the point that relationships and love are pretty much the same whether you're gay, straight, or bi. Sometimes, love sucks. Great six!

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  6. What a disappointment for Jamie. Emotions are well expressed.

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  7. OUCH!! Poor Jamie. Great six Lisa!!

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  8. Awesome Six. I feel for Jaime though! I want to slap Remy!

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