Saturday, 9 July 2011

SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY!


LAUREL HEIGHTS



Will is listening outside the door:-

“Did you offer yourself to him like I told you to?”
“Yes, but he didn't want me.”
“Why would he want a useless little whore like you?  You're nothing without me, what are you?”
“Nothing,” he whimpered.  “Nothing.”

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12 comments:

  1. Aw, he's brutal! Poor guy! I went back to the last couple of your SSS to see who Will is and what's happened earlier. Intrigued! Didn't see this one, though.

    Is this published or a WIP?

    Thanks!

    Kally

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  2. Love sixes that are all conversation. Feel like I stepped into the room and got to eavesdrop! Great six!

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  3. Oh Gee. Sad six. Well done, but I feel for her. Ought to kick his ass to curb.

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  4. Wow, that's rough. You feel so badly for him in just a few sentences. Great six!

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  5. A very rough six, would love to see what happens next.

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  6. Painfully emotional.

    Nice work!

    SammyJo

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  7. Ouch. Really bad guy. I hope the creep gets what he deserves.

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  8. What an arsehole (excuse the language)! Great snippet, though!

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