Friday, 23 March 2012

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY!!



Hello my pretties and welcome to Flash Fiction Friday, where you will find one hundred words per week based upon a picture chosen at random by either myself or my cohorts in this marvellous adventure.  Make sure you follow the at the bottom of this post to see what other delights await you.

I stared into his eyes.  Deep green eyes like a stormy sea on a winter’s day.  The bronze of his torso gleaming in the harsh lights surrounding us.  His fingers were warm curled around my neck and his muscles flexed beneath my hand where it lay against his knee.  I knew I was envied by the watching crowd.  Knew they all wanted to replace me.  I tried to keep desire burning in my gaze as the camera flashed, while wondering how they’d feel if they knew the most beautiful model in the world had the worst breath I’d ever encountered.


See you next week!

10 comments:

  1. Lisa, Lisa!!! OMG, hoW funny!!! Sucked into the fluid, captivating description of their shared touching, I was poised, waiting for the tumult of passion, only to be greeted by the need for Tic-Tacs! Fabulous! Loved it! Laughing!! And blowing you chuckling kisses. Got me:) xo

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  2. I laughed so hard I nearly pissed my pants. That was fantastic! Excuse me, I think I need to go get an altoid or something now...

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  3. ROFL very funny, Lisa! great post

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  4. Ha ha ha, that's funny!! lovely prose and funny, great flash!!

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  5. OMG that was so funny. Totally sucked in there with the romantic line you really pulled the rug from under me.

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  6. LOL That as awesome my dear Lisa!

    SLira

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  7. LOL! Oh no, bad breath. That’s a deal breaker. Time to get up a bail out. *grin*

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