Friday, 27 January 2012

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY

Hello my pretties and welcome to Flash Fiction Friday, where you will find one hundred words per week based upon a picture chosen at random by either myself or my cohorts in this marvellous adventure.  Make sure you follow the links both within the one hundred and at the bottom of this post to see what other delights await you.



Tom shivered, the polished wood of the table was cold against his bare ass.  He couldn’t remember how long he’d been in this position, legs bent, hands clasped between them. 
He remembered the guy in the bar, soft conversation and the ease with which the drinks slid down his throat.  Then nothing.
A shuffling from across the room had his heart leaping into his mouth when a barely human voice rasped, “Don’t scream.  It makes him mad.”
“Where are we?” Tom hissed, peering into the dark.
His blood turned to ice water in his veins when the voice replied, “Hell.”

A huge thank you to Tom Webb for being this week's guest star.  Make sure you head on over to his blog, Bear on Books to check out his wonderful reviews.

And make sure you do the clicky clicky to check out all the other one hundreds in relation to this week's pic.

19 comments:

  1. Nice surprise here, Lisa. You caught me totally unawares. Well done!

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  2. Oohh...that's good! I loved this!

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  3. Great post. Poor Tom. Hope he gets out of hell!

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  4. Oh crap!! Tom's in hell? Wow, hope he'll get out of it, one way or another!
    Great post!!

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  5. Oh wow, is that what it's going to be like, sitting butt naked in a cold room, nipples hard and privates shriveled up in fear. Yep, that sounds like Hell. Poor Tom.

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  6. Hell it would be indeed. Good work, Lisa!!!

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  7. Hell? Whoa. I'm thinking that table should've been burning his butt. Cool post.

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  8. I probably pee myself too. No wait. I'd be more shocked to get into heaven. Hell is home turf. good six. I enjoyed it.

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  9. Oh wow. I wonder what will happen when "he" arrives. Nice job! :)

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  10. Wow this is so creepy in such a great way! I want more.

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  11. Here I was expecting a nice and pretty wrap up and that last line...that last word...it made my heart beat faster and I think I forgot to breathe! Excellent Lisa! Just freaking OMG!

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  12. Yikes! Poor Tom. :( Is that Hell or the figurative "Hell"?

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  13. Scary flash! Can l rescue him? He's far too cute to go to hell!

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